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12/04/00: Welcome to the Fold (Part two) INT. ELIAS’S STUDY -- EARLY MORNING High-ceilinged and elegant, like everything else in this world. And cold. One wall is dominated by a huge, beautiful PORTRAIT of what must be Elias’s
creation, VALIS. He's dressed in the same manner as the costume player who was
portraying him, but Valis's face is of course totally different: a strikingly
handsome man with oddly haunted EYES. Elias sits in front of the TV, half watching news coverage of the three
deaths. His expression is weird and distant. Elias, on the phone to Haldeman (filtered). ELIAS HALDEMAN ELIAS HALDEMAN ELIAS HALDEMAN ELIAS Elias alone, drinking. As he paces... pushes feebly through papers on his desk... watches TV...
slumps on the bed. He’s blocked. He stands, heads for the closet. Opens it and feels around inside his jacket.
He draws out a BOOK, the same one he stuffed in his coat and forgot about. He
sits down at the desk and pours himself a drink. It is a graphic novel; a comic book. Dressed in a uniform that’s suggestive of a Marines dress uniform crossed
with the garb of a viceroy of the British Empire. Long yellowish hair and a LOOK
of strength and self- assurance. She’s got a SWORD leveled right at our face. He’s caught up in it. Turns pages. Elias in the f.g., turning pages. Absorbed. From somewhere: BOOT-STEPS. The far door opens and the GIRL we’ve just seen walks in, dressed exactly
as we’ve seen her. She stands out so blatantly -- her buttons so shiny, the
SWORD POMMEL at her belt so brilliant -- that SHE CANNOT BE ANYTHING BUT WHAT HE
IS IMAGINING. ELIAS (V.O.) Haruna snaps out her SWORD. ELIAS (V.O.) Her sword FLASHES out and almost spears a similarly attired YOUNG MAN --
handsome, princely. He reaches forward to take the sword from her hand, and when
she steps closer to surrender it, she’s now wearing a BALL GOWN. ELIAS (V.O.) They dance around the study. Elias is no longer visible. ELIAS (V.O.) They swirl through the double doors and into A gigantic ballroom full of dancing couples, their movements underscored by a
bombastic WALTZ. ELIAS (V.O.) The Prince and Haruna, clearly enjoying themselves. And then Haruna changes
partners on him, dancing with another, older man. ELIAS (V.O.) The Prince stands there, watching, and letting a slow smile spread across his
face. ELIAS (V.O.) The Prince reaches over to cut in - -- and is suddenly pressing a GUN to the head of a SWEATING NOBLEMAN. Haruna
is trussing the fellow up with a big grin. ELIAS (V.O.) Haruna gags the nobleman and knocks him unconscious. She and the Prince go rocketing out the room and down the hallway, whooping
with laughter... ELIAS (V.O.) SMASH! Haruna, dressed in a mutant version of her previous garb, dives out a
high window and uses a DRAPERY to break her fall... ELIAS (V.O.) Haruna paints graffiti: WHY NOT CUT CLASS SOCIETY? ELIAS (V.O.) Haruna, on motorcycle, rides right up to the side of an ARMORED CAR and
shoves a pistol into the side of the GUARD near it. The Prince and several
COHORTS land on the roof, burst from the shrubs, take a bolt cutter to the
lock... ELIAS (V.O.) The prow of a ship cutting through the water. Hanging off the figurehead,
laughing, swinging her sword, is Haruna. And as we go WIDER, we see the Prince
above her, grinning. ELIAS (V.O.) A swarthy GUNMAN has shot The Prince in the face. Still in SLOW MOTION, as Haruna leaps in shock from her side of the table,
upsetting chair and spilling cards and chips everywhere. She lunges at the
weapon... BLAM! A shot across her SHOULDER, spinning her like a top. Smashes down on
the table, flipping it like a poker chip. Tears on her face as she claws for her
dying lover. Haruna stands ramrod straight, shoulder bandaged, as The Prince is burned on
the beach in a funeral pyre. Her comrades in attendance. ELIAS (V.O.) Haruna and comrades do a sword salute over the pyre. Tears wet her face. ELIAS (V.O.) Haruna and a WEAPONS CRAFTER huddle over a bench, on which lies a SABER with
an exaggerated looking hand guard. ELIAS (V.O.) Haruna reaches down and detaches the hand guard, presses a stud on it -- and
it expands into a KNIFE-PISTOL, a cross between a razor-sharp stiletto, brass
knuckles, and a double- barreled, double-action revolver. Haruna dueling with the knifepistol as a kind of main gauche; blasting out
windows; firing off part of the knife- pistol as a GRAPPLING LINE; slinging it
like a THROWING STAR; etc... ELIAS (V.O.) Image FREEZES on an action pose of Haruna... and DISSOLVES to a
BLACK-AND-WHITE LINE DRAWING -- a panel from the comic in the book. And with
that we’re back to... Sitting with the book in his lap, his finger in the pages. He is absolutely
staggered. ELIAS The book falls to the floor. Haldeman’s office. A pleasant mess of papers and books, with a window open
out onto the city sprawl. Haldeman has the first volume of the box set in his hands. He’s going back
and fort from one book to another, checking and cross-referencing. HALDEMAN ELIAS Elias is fidgeting. Haldeman puts a hand on his shoulder to steady him. ELIAS HALDEMAN Elias makes a "go ahead" gesture. HALDEMAN Elias talks fast. ELIAS Haldeman nods, slowly. He’s looking right at Elias and seeing through his lie. HALDEMAN He tosses the book back onto the pile on his desk. CUT TO:
Gliding through the city. Elias is fuming to himself. Ranting into a POCKET RECORDING DEVICE. ELIAS Exasperated sigh. ELIAS He clicks off the recorder. ELIAS He looks up at the city.
Which looks entirely out of place from the rest of the surrounding architecture. It looks like something out of the graphic novel. IT IS. And hanging from a cupola near the top is a small female figure: HARUNA.
Haruna scampers down the side of the building and disappears into an ALLEY. ELIAS (V.O.)
Haruna presses herself against a darkened doorway and knocks out a CODE on the door. The door opens a crack -- and ELIAS stands there, decked out in a similar outfit. They embrace. Kiss fiercely. The door SLAMS in our face. OVER BLACK we hear VOICES ON THE PHONE: HALDEMAN (V.O.) ELIAS (V.O.) HALDEMAN (V.O.)
-- Elias has photocopied many panels from the graphic novel and pinned them up over his desk. Post-It notes, scrawled annotations, arrows, lists, all overlapping each other in a paper mosaic. ELIAS (V.O.) HALDEMAN (V.O.) Beat. ELIAS (V.O.) -- Elias at his computer. On screen: HARUNA THE PRINCE, BY ELIAS MARLOWE. Then, with the clicking of keys: FROM A STORY BY RAVANNA FRANCOEUR.
MUSIC playing. Haldeman is on a high stepladder, shelving books in a floor-to-ceiling bookcase. Humming along to the tune. He pushes one of the books to the back of the shelf. His HAND freezes in place... trembles. His FACE is bloated and shaking. He is having a heart attack. HALDEMAN (WHISPERING) His eyes go wide. And then close. His fingers go slack. FROM ABOVE we watch as he slowly tilts backwards off the ladder and plummets to his death on the desk below. Papers, books, pens, all scatter in SLOW MOTION as the desk breaks in half like a salt cracker when he lands on it. A MARBLE rolls to his cheek and STOPS there. INSIDE it is a reflected, distorted SHAPE... and as we draw CLOSER...
...we see it’s HALDEMAN’S BODY IN A CASKET, in state. Elias is one of the very few mourners here in this somber-looking room. He sits with another man, a BOOKSELLER, about Haldeman’s age. BOOKSELLER ELIAS BOOKSELLER Or at least a hint from his hardening arteries to lay off the god-damned pork rinds and cognac! The bookseller laughs roughly. BOOKSELLER ELIAS He looks over past Haldeman’s body and sees a FIGURE out of focus. It’s HARUNA. We can tell even from here. ELIAS Elias stands and walks, following Haruna, who remains just out of range. He follows her back through the building and into:
Haruna stands in the middle of the room, reflected by mirrors all around. Smiling. ELIAS He’s not unfriendly, just curious. HARUNA Elias opens his pocket. The Haruna book is in there. Did he put it there? There’s confusion on his face. HARUNA She steps up to him and caresses his face. HARUNA FLASH SHOT of the other author’s name, RAVANNA FRANCOEUR, being deleted from the screen... HARUNA ELIAS She puts her arms around his neck. She is seductive, assured. HARUNA ELIAS HARUNA He grabs her face and presses his mouth to hers. STROBE FLASH SHOTS of each letter of Ravanna Francoeur’s name as it is DELETED from the screen...
Elias dictating to his computer, which transcribes his words flawlessly. His dictating voice is quiet and measured. ELIAS (V.O.) -- Elias contemplates the other volumes in the series, as yet unread, then take several large GUMMED LABELS and tapes them shut. ELIAS (V.O.) The books sit on the shelf like little BOMBS, all in a row. Join us again next month, faithful readers, for part three!
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